Peer Review : 4

Hey Grace,

I chose to go back to the start for my last peer review, and I’m really glad I did.

I don’t have any ethnic background other than Australian, but over the past year I’ve been with my partner who is Lebanese. It was gratifying reading your experience with your definition of “An Australian” compared to your experiences as a Lebanese women.

I really liked your last line

“Without each community, Australia would be a little less multicultural and diverse”

This resonated with me looking back onto the unit and how we have learned so much about the Australian Identity and how that transcends into literature.

I also really liked the two flags as your image.

Thank you!

Summative Entry

Australia is not a finished product

At the start of this unit, I admittedly didn’t know a lot about Australian literature compared to some of my peers. While I love to read, I haven’t read the ‘classics’, let alone Early Colonial Poetry.

It was with delight that we started with writing by and about Indigenous Australians. Such a wealth of knowledge and deep emotion.

Nothing called to me more in the unit than in this section. This was amplified in the gallery visit we undertook with the beautiful artistry displayed.

My favourite piece from that section was Judith Wright’s “Niggers Leap”. The irony and her opaque writing style highlighted her message for me, making it one of my favourite pieces for the semester.

 “Did we not know their blood channelled our rivers,
and the black dust our crops ate was their dust?
O all men are one man at last.”

Succeeding, the unit formed into Early European / Australian authors. I found it interesting reading literature that was in a way degrading the Australian landscape in its description depicting a barrow and non-providing land. The European mindset came out vividly in this period, which provided an excellent contrast to the subsequent literature we studied.

Fast Forwarding to New Australian Poetry – Oh, how times have changed!

I feel a lot more well versed into how far come Australia has come in its literary identity. However,

Australia is not a finished product

We are a relatively young continent by any means and have a lot of room ahead of us to be ever-changing and use our diverse population to our advantage. Australian Literature shouldn’t pre-maturely stunt its growth into adapting to our supposed Australian Identity. We have such a diverse, cultural populace, that without sounding too cliché’, the sky really is the limit.

PEER REVIEW: 3

Charles Lilienthal – Week 5 – Art Gallery Visit

Hey Charles,

I enjoyed your response to our art gallery visit and what works that you found challenging/interesting.

I particularly liked how you started in outlining the works that were depicted, namely – The Gold Rush, Colonial Frontiers of Australia and Early Indigenous Artworks.

Additionally, I found your favourite works (specifically the Ned Kelly artwork) an interesting choice. Your explanation accompanying it also helped my understanding.

From a readability point of view, the only criticism I could make is utilising structure to your advantage. Your points would have been even more impactful if they were structured with paragraphs as well as it would make it easier on the readers eyes.

Looking forward to reading more of your work,

Serena Doran

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Blog Post 2 – Creative

 “And then we must be free to kiss and part”. Write a short letter or poem that proclaims the kind of personal freedom that Ada Cambridge proposes in this line.

Due to layout issues I had to post the poem I wrote as an image. It’s meant to convey the freedom Ada Cambridge is experiencing; in going against the grain and social conventions of being a wife to ultimately being free as both a lover and her individual identity.

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