Charles Lilienthal – Week 5 – Art Gallery Visit
Hey Charles,
I enjoyed your response to our art gallery visit and what works that you found challenging/interesting.
I particularly liked how you started in outlining the works that were depicted, namely – The Gold Rush, Colonial Frontiers of Australia and Early Indigenous Artworks.
Additionally, I found your favourite works (specifically the Ned Kelly artwork) an interesting choice. Your explanation accompanying it also helped my understanding.
From a readability point of view, the only criticism I could make is utilising structure to your advantage. Your points would have been even more impactful if they were structured with paragraphs as well as it would make it easier on the readers eyes.
Looking forward to reading more of your work,
Serena Doran
Serena's LitBlog 